Comic 44 - Pursuit 3.8

4th Jun 2012, 1:54 PM in Pursuit
Pursuit 3.8
Average Rating: 5 (1 votes)
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ChilPhil 4th Jun 2012, 1:54 PM edit delete
I didn't like how the last panel turned out, but I spent way too much time on this page as it is. Moving on.
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dougwarner59 4th Jun 2012, 6:53 PM edit delete reply
It looks good to me. Maybe a shadow underneath them may have helped, but it gets the point across. (It really is hard to make everthing perfect, as long as the reader knows what is going on is all that counts. Frame 3 really looks good.
ChilPhil 5th Jun 2012, 9:55 AM edit delete reply
@ dougwarner59: Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. I think adding shadows is an excellent idea. I'll go add some when time allows. Also thanks for subscribing.
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